Frontside 180 Nosegrind Eight Stair Rail
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Bummed on the homies in the background.
**EDIT** I deleted the black and white version of this picture. The color one is up now though and here it is. Thanks everyone.
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Started by veterat, Feb 20 2012 01:31 AM
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 10:58 AM
IMO, if you got closer and maybe a little to the left and framed him against the solid sky, and like Tim said had the tree on the right side, it would add to the height of the rail and be a lot more pleasing. Still rad though no hate over here
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 01:44 PM
Color looks so much better. The skater definitely pops out more.
I agree but it's the bright bottom board that grabs the attention, not the dude. Anyway, the goal is reached in that you see the skating immediately.
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 02:25 PM
I didn't say the skater grabs the attention, just that he pops out more which he does. In the b&w photo, the skater's legs completely blend into the wall where in the color photo, you can see the lighting more on his legs which tend to make him pop out more.I agree but it's the bright bottom board that grabs the attention, not the dude. Anyway, the goal is reached in that you see the skating immediately.
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 04:28 PM
color works better for this shot
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 05:56 PM
sorry for an unproductive comment, but
Does he only have one arm?
Does he only have one arm?
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 06:23 PM
Yeah, Tim's right about the color and getting closer and lower. The lighting is nicely done. I'm personally getting really sick of shooting 3:2 fish for handrails... either the rail looks small vertical, or its hard to fit everything and be close horizontally. If I were you, I would just crop the right side of the frame out to about 4:3 or so on this one. Most people wont notice and you'll have a more balanced frame.
MikeyN, on Jul 30 2009, 02:45 AM, said:
soul sk8er photographer, bro.
kohlton, on Jul 30 2009, 03:34 AM, said:
yeah right, I'm joining team x-blades.
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 08:12 PM
sorry for an unproductive comment, but
Does he only have one arm?
Yeah, he has a nub, the rest of his arm got blown off in Nam...
only kidding. His arm was pointing towards the building.
Yeah, Tim's right about the color and getting closer and lower. The lighting is nicely done. I'm personally getting really sick of shooting 3:2 fish for handrails... either the rail looks small vertical, or its hard to fit everything and be close horizontally. If I were you, I would just crop the right side of the frame out to about 4:3 or so on this one. Most people wont notice and you'll have a more balanced frame.
I don't understand what you mean by the ratios sorry can you explain that again? and big thanks to everyone for the constructive criticism, it really helps.
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Posted 20 February 2012 - 10:36 PM
I'm just talking about the aspect ratio of the frame. 35mm and small format digi are 3:2
MikeyN, on Jul 30 2009, 02:45 AM, said:
soul sk8er photographer, bro.
kohlton, on Jul 30 2009, 03:34 AM, said:
yeah right, I'm joining team x-blades.
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