Sunrise Skate/surf Shop Commercial

[l0ganr1gby 23]

Still a rough draft. Still need to film a little more and cut it down to about 30 seconds. Told me to film this to promote an Instagram contest they're having so I need to add some titles and stuff after the fade out too.

 

Let me know what you guys think so I know what to do the next (last) day we go out to film. Thanks.

 

 

[WestonKruse 862]

good clean edit, get the kid with the iphone out of there. maybe some rolling long lens. pretty much everything from 13* seconds to 23 seconds doesnt look good at all. Good filming otherwise. Keep it up

[spiker369 17]

good clean edit, get the kid with the iphone out of there. maybe some rolling long lens. pretty much everything from 1 seconds to 23 seconds doesnt look good at all. Good filming otherwise. Keep it up

 

The blunt looked really good.....

[l0ganr1gby 23]

good clean edit, get the kid with the iphone out of there. maybe some rolling long lens. pretty much everything from 1 seconds to 23 seconds doesnt look good at all. Good filming otherwise. Keep it up

 

 

Told me to film this to promote an Instagram contest they're having

 

 

That's the point of it. He's not just there pointing with his phone for nothing, haha.

[WestonKruse 862]

The blunt looked really good.....

 

I meant 13 seconds i guess i forgot to type the 3

 

That's the point of it. He's not just there pointing with his phone for nothing, haha.

The blunt looked really good.....

 

I guess I read it wrong, I think you should do something in the lines of taking a snapshot from one of the pics and record a vid of you posting it on your phone... so you know it has something to do with instagram.

[lsara3699 2]

yeah it looked good. the instagram angle wasnt as played up as i was expecting it to be though. i think either take that one shot with the dude in the background out or grab a few more inserts of stuff like that