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Feeble Pop Out

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Jeremy Cooper. Feeble pop out on the scaffold. Detroit. 2018. 

Ektar 100. Hasselblad 501cm. CF 30mm. 1x sunpak 555 to the right. 1x sunpak 120j to the left. Shot @ f8 1/60th iso 100. 

Critique is always welcome. Please click photo to view full res. Thanks. 

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I like the colour scheme, angle is good too. Maybe you could have moved the right flash such that the shadow was cast a bit further to the left instead of on the maroon wall. Also I'm generally not a fan of tricks where you can only see one arm, but you can't check when shooting film and there probably wasn't an awful lot you could do about it in this case.

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colour scheme is on point!. the lines and even that arrow go with the direction of the skater. only thing id add to it would be some dodging here and there to create some separation of the right leg and maybe on the shadow side of the face. only thing that kills it is the comic sans font haha. props on keeping the hassyfish alive! that setup, minus the film, is a huge investment.

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